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Jiangyueming Posted 14 years ago
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Can you help me correct two sentences? Thank you!
I was responsible for SEO in the company, whose techinique ranks the company's website earlier in the search results page. It can bring more traffic to the website and more traffic means more costomers who browse our products, which can bring more profits.
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I hope some expert checks my suggestion. As you can tell, I failed to minimize the edits. In the company, I was responsible for Search Engine Optimization, which involved improving the search results ranking of the company's online product shop to attract more visitors to it, and thus help to boost sales and maximize profits.
- I hope some expert checks my suggestion.
- As you can tell, I failed to minimize the edits.
- In the company, I was responsible for Search Engine Optimization, which involved improving the search results ranking of the company's online product shop to attract more visitors to it, and thus help to boost sales and maximize profits.
- As a SEO specialist in the company, my job was to improve...
- As a SEO specialist in the company, I was responsible for improving...
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I hope some expert checks my suggestion. As you can tell, I failed to minimize the edits.
In the company, I was responsible for Search Engine Optimization, which involved improving the search results ranking of the company's online product shop to attract more visitors to it, and thus help to boost sales and maximize profits.
As a SEO specialist in the company, my job was to impr
In the company, I was responsible for Search Engine Optimization, which involved improving the search results ranking of the company's online product shop to attract more visitors to it, and thus help to boost sales and maximize profits.
As a SEO specialist in the company, my job was to impr
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