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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Can you help me correct this text?
Hi,
I did my best to make this text as good as I can, but I would appreciate someone with native English to look at it. It is description of my application that is going to be published in the marketplace in few days.
Description:
Pocket Translator is a Windows Phone 7 application that that gives you ability to translate back and forth between more than 50 languages, playback audio of the transaltion, and bring the power of the Google Translator to your phone.
Design of the application adjust to your theme settings, and makes it your truly personal translator, suitable for both vacations and business trips.
Features:
- translates 50 languages, including japanese and chinese
- common phrases
- send translations by sms and email
- pronunciation
- history
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New in version 1.5
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- share translation
- offline translation history
- page animations
- common phrases
- translations of single words contains also other possible meanings
- performance improvements
I did my best to make this text as good as I can, but I would appreciate someone with native English to look at it. It is description of my application that is going to be published in the marketplace in few days.
Description:
Pocket Translator is a Windows Phone 7 application that that gives you ability to translate back and forth between more than 50 languages, playback audio of the transaltion, and bring the power of the Google Translator to your phone.
Design of the application adjust to your theme settings, and makes it your truly personal translator, suitable for both vacations and business trips.
Features:
- translates 50 languages, including japanese and chinese
- common phrases
- send translations by sms and email
- pronunciation
- history
----------------------
New in version 1.5
----------------------
- share translation
- offline translation history
- page animations
- common phrases
- translations of single words contains also other possible meanings
- performance improvements
Top answer
I would make a few changes, as given below (new wording in bold, deleted wording crossed out). I would also use verbs in your "features" section to give more detail. Don't use verbs in some instances and not in others.
- I would make a few changes, as given below (new wording in bold, deleted wording crossed out).
- I would also use verbs in your "features" section to give more detail.
- Don't use verbs in some instances and not in others.
- That is awkward.
- Description: Pocket Translator is a Windows Phone 7 application that that gives you ability to translate back and forth between more than 50 languages, playback audio of the translation transaltion , and bring the power of the Google Translator to your phone.
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I would make a few changes, as given below (new wording in bold, deleted wording crossed out). I would also use verbs in your "features" section to give more detail. Don't use verbs in some instances and not in others. That is awkward.
Description:
Pocket Translator is a Windows Phone 7 applicationthat that gives you ability to translate back and forth betwe
Description:
Pocket Translator is a Windows Phone 7 application
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