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Jiangyueming Posted 14 years ago
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Can you help me correct these sentences? Thank you!

When I read the book the secret at first, it seems ridiculous as it claims you could achieve anything once you think it, repeatly, in your mind. However, after a while, it appears plausible to some extent. It depends on your altitute, if you have a great desire for something, then maybe you are desperate to accomplish it in any way you knew.
  

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Altitute isn't a word; it's spelled altitude , but that isn't the appropriate word here. I think you meant attitude . When I read the book The Secret for the first time, it seemed ridiculous because the writer claimed that one could achieve anything if one imagines it repeatedly.

  • Altitute isn't a word; it's spelled altitude , but that isn't the appropriate word here.
  • I think you meant attitude .
  • When I read the book The Secret for the first time, it seemed ridiculous because the writer claimed that one could achieve anything if one imagines it repeatedly.
  • However, after a while, the idea appeared plausible to some extent.
  • It depends on your attitude.
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Altitute isn't a word; it's spelled altitude, but that isn't the appropriate word here. I think you meant attitude.

When I read the book The Secret for the first time, it seemed ridiculous because the writer claimed that one could achieve anything if one imagines it repeatedly. However, after a while, the idea appeared plausible to some extent. It depend
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Oh,I made a stupid mistake. Thank you!!!

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