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Jiangyueming Posted 14 years ago
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Can you help me correct these sentences? Thank you!
Making mistakes helps children become more confident. When I was a kid, teacher Li invited me to give a speech in front of class on how did I think about freedom. I spent two days preparing it, but when I stood in front of the class, I stammered. All the students were laughing at me. Thus, I became afraid of giving speech publicly. However, my mother always gave me chances to speak in public and offered me useful advice, such as how to organize my language efficiently. Now I am much confident and really enjoy speaking publicly.
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I have underlined some problem areas. Please try to correct them and post your revised text here. Making mistakes helps children become more confident.
- I have underlined some problem areas.
- Please try to correct them and post your revised text here.
- Making mistakes helps children become more confident.
- When I was a kid , teacher Li invited me to give a speech in front of class on how did I think about freedom.
- I spent two days preparing it, but when I stood in front of the class, I stammered.
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I have underlined some problem areas. Please try to correct them and post your revised text here.
Making mistakes helps children become more confident. When I was a kid, teacher Li invited me to give a speech in front of class on how did I think about freedom. I spent two days preparing it, but when I stood in front of the class, I stammered. All the students
Making mistakes helps children become more confident. When I was a kid, teacher Li invited me to give a speech in front of class on how did I think about freedom. I spent two days preparing it, but when I stood in front of the class, I stammered. All the students
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Thank you so much. Here is my revision:
Making mistakes helps children become more confident. When I was a child, Teacher Li invited me to give a speech in front of class on how I thought about freedom. I spent two days preparing it, but when I stood in front of the class, I stammered. All the students were laughing at me. Thus, I became afraid of speaking publicly. However, my mother always g
Making mistakes helps children become more confident. When I was a child, Teacher Li invited me to give a speech in front of class on how I thought about freedom. I spent two days preparing it, but when I stood in front of the class, I stammered. All the students were laughing at me. Thus, I became afraid of speaking publicly. However, my mother always g
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that is really good, just a few small things, e.g. I would suggest "my teacher..."
You could say *much more confident" too, "more confident" is also 100% correct, ("much confident" is not!)
I have to admit I think many natives would say "all the students were laughing at me" but "all the students laughed at me" is more correct....
You could say *much more confident" too, "more confident" is also 100% correct, ("much confident" is not!)
I have to admit I think many natives would say "all the students were laughing at me" but "all the students laughed at me" is more correct....
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Making mistakes helps children become more confident. When I was a child, my teacher, Mr Li, invited me to give a speech in front of class on [what I thought about] freedom. I spent two days preparing it, but when I stood in front of the class, I stammered. All the students laughed at me. Thus, I became afraid of speaking publicly. However, my mother always gave me chances to
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