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Jiangyueming Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
Can you help me correct these sentences? Thank you!
Once, JJ, a famous star in my country, went shopping. Many people recognized her and wanted her signatures. She refused and wanted to leave but around 50 people crowded around her. She gave an unintended push to a person. Then next day, she was reported as an impudent person.
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Maybe a comma before "but" is needed.
Once, JJ, a famous star in my country, went shopping. ...................and wanted to leave , but around 50 people crowded around her. She gave an unintended push to a person. Then next day, she was reported as an impudent person.
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Once, JJ, a famous star in my country, went shopping. ...................and wanted to leave , but around 50 people crowded around her. She gave an unintended push to a person. Then next day, she was reported as an impudent person.
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