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Jiangyueming Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Can you help me correct these sentences? Thank you!

Doing homework independently helps children prepare for the future. This is a competitive society; when you work in a team, you can't rely on others to do your work. If you do so, your boss probably will fire you.
  

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Hi, Doing homework independently helps children prepare for the future. This is a competitive society; when you work in a team, you can't rely on others to do your work. If you do so, your boss probably will fire you.

— Clive

  • Hi, Doing homework independently helps children prepare for the future.
  • This is a competitive society; when you work in a team, you can't rely on others to do your work.
  • If you do so, your boss probably will fire you.
  • OK, but I prefer a period to a semi-colon Clive
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Hi,

Doing homework independently helps children prepare for the future. This is a competitive society; when you work in a team, you can't rely on others to do your work. If you do so, your boss probably will fire you.

OK, but I prefer a period to a semi-colon

Clive
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