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Jiangyueming Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
Can you help me correct these sentences? Thank you!
When he was a kid, he loved solving mathematic problems, but he didn’t have money to go to school. He had to figure out them on his own. Sometimes in order to compute some geometrical puzzles, he had to go Rusong Library to read a large amount of relevant resources and found the answers. In the later interview, he said it was a valuable experience for him because he learned how to solve problems independently.
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When he was a kid, he loved solving mathematical (or math ) problems, but he didn’t have money to go to school. He had to figure out them out on his own. Sometimes in order to compute some geometrical puzzles, he had to go the Rusong Library to read a large amount of relevant resources and find the answers.
- When he was a kid, he loved solving mathematical (or math ) problems, but he didn’t have money to go to school.
- He had to figure out them out on his own.
- Sometimes in order to compute some geometrical puzzles, he had to go the Rusong Library to read a large amount of relevant resources and find the answers.
- In a later interview, he said it was a valuable experience for him because he learned how to solve problems independently.
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When he was a kid, he loved solving mathematical (or math) problems, but he didn’t have money to go to school. He had to figure out them out on his own. Sometimes in order to compute some geometrical puzzles, he had to go the Rusong Library to read a large amount of relevant resources and find the answers. In a later interview, he said it was a
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jiangyueming, Your version is understood and grammatically ok. But it needs some rearranging and rewording to improve the senamtics and cohesion.
Here is a revised version.
When he was a kid, he didn't have the opportunity to go to school because his family was poor. But he loved methematic and always tried to figure out problems on his own. Sometimes, he would spent long hours in
Here is a revised version.
When he was a kid, he didn't have the opportunity to go to school because his family was poor. But he loved methematic and always tried to figure out problems on his own. Sometimes, he would spent long hours in
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There are some errors in this version. The original version (as corrected) was fine.
When he was a kid, he didn't have the opportunity to go to school because his family was poor. But he loved mathematics and always tried to figure out problems on his own. Sometimes, he would spent long hours in the Rusong Library trying to figure out geometric problems. During his latest in
When he was a kid, he didn't have the opportunity to go to school because his family was poor. But he loved mathematics and always tried to figure out problems on his own. Sometimes, he would spent long hours in the Rusong Library trying to figure out geometric problems. During his latest in
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