Can you help me correct these FEW sentences?

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Could you please help correct these few sentences?

1 I have too packed a schedule.

2 How are you schedules at this school?/What are your schedules like at this school?

3 The worse thing that could happen is...

4 It died before it could fully charge my phone.

Thank you

Holyduke · Accepted Answer

I have a jam-packed schedule. (or simply an impossible schedule)

How are your schedule at school?

The worse (I think "worst" is more commonly used, but worse is ok with a different meaning) thing(s) that can happen is(are)...

With worst, only one thing can happen. With worse, multiple things can happen.

It ran out of juice before it could fully charge my phone. (what is it? A charger or battery source? If it is the charger, you can use: died, broke down, fried...)

PS. Not sure if it is jam-packed or jammed pack

Free_spirit · Answer

1 I have too packed a schedule. ["My schedule is too packed/busy." (or jam-packed as HolyDuke suggested)]

2 How are you schedules at this school?/What are your schedules like at this school?

3 The worst thing that could happen is...

4 It died before it could fully charge my phone. [I assume you are talking about the charger, rather than the phone? Anyway, I'd suggest, "It died before my phone was fully charged." If you are talking about the charger, it is already the subject of the sentences/conversation. You could also say "...before my phone had finished charging."]

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