Can you help me correct my short paragraphs? Thank you.

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00I am not sure whether the these paragraphs make sense in term of grammar and semantics. 02br
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00Can you give me a hand with checking them 02br
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001.00My opposition appears to be that a00lthough the video camera can offer such an accurate and persuasive record of contemporary life, it still can not replace written records. The fact is that words play a vital role in depicting what happens around people’s life.02br
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002.Watching these political reformers who were going on trial for rioting and illegal assembling on television can only give audience the fragmentary of this event00.02br
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003.Even if audience all over the world watched the sorrowful image of the tank man who stood before a tank and sacrificed himself for Chinese democratization, its image still couldn’t help all audiences absolutely figure out the event of Tiananmen Square protests of 1989. It is only when people read the documentations about this event that they can understand what caused and happened in Tiananmen Square protests. 02br
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004.The mass media merely report that Taiwan00 suffers from a large-scale earthquake through broadcasting a series of pictures and images. However, the newspapers and magazines would use words to cover the detail of the calamity of the beginning and subsequent development.00 02br
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