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Adonis Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

Can you help me correct my sentences? Thank you

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001.It is difficult to agree with the notion that people’s loyalty make an increasingly negative impact on whatever institution—school, company, institution and so forth—they work for. In fact, those who follow the virtue of faithfulness enable their organization to realize their long-term goal.02br
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002. Some engineers 00refuse a higher pay provided by its otehr companies.02br
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003. 00The reason why they are devoted themselves to Hon Hai is that they are proud of their company and hope that they can contribute their ability to their company that will become the world-class one.02br
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004. Many high-tech companies make use of many ways to recruit talents from Hon Hai Precision Industry. However, they don’t accept their job offer because they are loyal workers of Hon Hai. 02br
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It is difficult to agree with the notion that people’s loyalty has an increasingly negative impact on whatever institution — school, company, and so forth — they work for. 02font 02br 02br 01font 002. 02font 02br 02br 01font 003.

— Clive

  • It is difficult to agree with the notion that people’s loyalty has an increasingly negative impact on whatever institution — school, company, and so forth — they work for.
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  • Many high-tech companies use various ways to try to recruit talented employees from Hon Hai Precision Industries.
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01font001.It is difficult to agree with the notion that people’s loyalty has an increasingly negative impact on whatever institution — school, company, and so forth — they work for. In fact, those who follow the virtue of loyalty enable their organization to realize its long-term goals.02font02br
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