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Kk Posted 20 years ago
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Can you help me correct my sentences? Thank you

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00I made some sentences, but I am not sure whether they are right or not. If you find something wrong in Grammar or vocabulary, help me check them.02br
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01font001. It can't be accepted that some politicians take advantage of their power to make some unfair and unjust laws to stabilize their regime or turbulent society. Furthermore, although a worthy goal can benefit and better the all aspect of people's lives, its means can't still break law or violate mainstream value.02br
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002. Although Wang Woo-Suk research into stem cells might cure a series of diseases, the majority of the people can't support the idea that he took human eggs from women bodies. 02br
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0Hi,02br 02br 01font 001. It is unacceptable that some politicians take advantage of their power to stabilize their regime or turbulent society by making unjust laws . 01i 00 00These two sentences do not seem to fit well together, semantically.

  • 0Hi,02br 02br 01font 001.
  • It is unacceptable that some politicians take advantage of their power to stabilize their regime or turbulent society by making unjust laws .
  • 01i 00 00These two sentences do not seem to fit well together, semantically.
  • The second one seems somewhat to justify the bad things described in the first one02i 02br 02br 002.
  • Although **** Woo-Suk's research into stem cells might cure a series of diseases, most people can't support the idea of taking human eggs from women's bodies.
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0Hi,02br
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01font001. It is unacceptable that some politicians take advantage of their power to stabilize their regime or turbulent society by making unjust laws . Furthermore, although a worthy goal can benefit and better every aspect of people's lives, it still cannot justify breaking the law or violating mainstream values.01i00 00

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