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Kk Posted 20 years ago
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Can you help me correct my sentences? Thank you
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00 I made some sentences, but I am not sure whether they are right or not. If you find something wrong in Grammar or vocabulary, help me check them. 02 br
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01 font 00 1. It can't be accepted that some politicians take advantage of their power to make some unfair and unjust laws to stabilize their regime or turbulent society. Furthermore, although a worthy goal can benefit and better the all aspect of people's lives, its means can't still break law or violate mainstream value. 02 br
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00 2. Although Wang Woo-Suk research into stem cells might cure a series of diseases, the majority of the people can't support the idea that he took human eggs from women bodies. 02 br
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00 Thank you very much in advance. 02 br
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00 I made some sentences, but I am not sure whether they are right or not. If you find something wrong in Grammar or vocabulary, help me check them. 02 br
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01 font 00 1. It can't be accepted that some politicians take advantage of their power to make some unfair and unjust laws to stabilize their regime or turbulent society. Furthermore, although a worthy goal can benefit and better the all aspect of people's lives, its means can't still break law or violate mainstream value. 02 br
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00 2. Although Wang Woo-Suk research into stem cells might cure a series of diseases, the majority of the people can't support the idea that he took human eggs from women bodies. 02 br
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00 Thank you very much in advance. 02 br
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0 Hi, 02 br 02 br 01 font 00 1. It is unacceptable that some politicians take advantage of their power to stabilize their regime or turbulent society by making unjust laws . 01 i 00 00 These two sentences do not seem to fit well together, semantically.
- 0 Hi, 02 br 02 br 01 font 00 1.
- It is unacceptable that some politicians take advantage of their power to stabilize their regime or turbulent society by making unjust laws .
- 01 i 00 00 These two sentences do not seem to fit well together, semantically.
- The second one seems somewhat to justify the bad things described in the first one 02 i 02 br 02 br 00 2.
- Although **** Woo-Suk's research into stem cells might cure a series of diseases, most people can't support the idea of taking human eggs from women's bodies.
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0 Hi, 02 br
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01 font 00 1. It is unacceptable that some politicians take advantage of their power to stabilize their regime or turbulent society by making unjust laws . Furthermore, although a worthy goal can benefit and better every aspect of people's lives, it still cannot justify breaking the law or violating mainstream values. 01 i 00 00
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01 font 00 1. It is unacceptable that some politicians take advantage of their power to stabilize their regime or turbulent society by making unjust laws . Furthermore, although a worthy goal can benefit and better every aspect of people's lives, it still cannot justify breaking the law or violating mainstream values. 01 i 00 00
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