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Yen dang Posted 9 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Can you help me correct my ielts writing task 2

hello teacher, im a new learner ielts , i have just start learned about ielts 2 months ago so i hope that your guy can help me correct that

reducing global environmental damage should be handled by governments rather than individuals. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

in many circles, the significant issues must be take action by government and citizens, specilizise about global problems. this should put emphasis on individuals attempt to solve this problem. the huge damge to the environment is that the most pressing problem. greenhouse gas emission is now at an alarming rate causes by many activitise such as waste too much food, use plastic and so many thing that man-made . i strongly belive that not only government take a great deal of effort to encoure people on socialty but also citizen must to do to minimize global environmental hazards.

  

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yen dangHello teachers, I'm a new learner preparing for the IELTS. I have just started to learn about
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Thank you very much for checked this for me. To be honest, i'm really really bad at grammer also writing task is extremly difficul for me. So can you help me about that ?

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