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Freshman English 1
October 8th 2009
A good hero
Napoleons a good hero because he’s different then the character usually portrayed as a hero. The film shows us the role of a hero from a unique point of view who’s usually tough and driven act’s normal. Napoleon is a different type of hero the exact opposite, he’s tough and is driven. Even though he lacks parents still takes care of himself. Even if his grandma’s a little crazy driving 4 wheeler in the desert. He’s brother kip he doesn’t take anything from him. Or his uncle who only cares about the glory days and making money napoleon doesn’t seem to care or bother with his uncle. Napoleon lacks a significant other which makes him feel socially unacceptable Napoleon does not let that bring him down.
The movie show’s he’s weird Napoleon school life lacks things also he doesn’t have many friends and is not well liked by the jocks who push him into lockers. Unlike the hero role where the person is popular and well liked by everybody. Napoleon is the exact opposite he has no friends and people don’t seem to like him. He does stand up for himself and put’s up a fight like other hero’s would do.
He’s has more of a goofy sense to him then a serious sense. He’s unpredictable whether his hurling casserole at his grandmothers llama or putting tatter tots in his pockets. Napoleon says what’s on his mind and doesn’t care who he’s saying it to. Even though napoleon get’s pushed around he doesn’t change himself or his ways.
An example is when he’s trying to get a ride to the dance after trying to get his uncle to drive him he hitches a ride in a low rider and Also when that kid is being bullied Napoleon tells him to vote for Pedro and you’ll be protected which the hero does in a movie always helps out people in need
He does whatever it takes to get there doesn’t give up like a true hero does.
Freshman English 1
October 8th 2009
A good hero
Napoleons a good hero because he’s different then the character usually portrayed as a hero. The film shows us the role of a hero from a unique point of view who’s usually tough and driven act’s normal. Napoleon is a different type of hero the exact opposite, he’s tough and is driven. Even though he lacks parents still takes care of himself. Even if his grandma’s a little crazy driving 4 wheeler in the desert. He’s brother kip he doesn’t take anything from him. Or his uncle who only cares about the glory days and making money napoleon doesn’t seem to care or bother with his uncle. Napoleon lacks a significant other which makes him feel socially unacceptable Napoleon does not let that bring him down.
The movie show’s he’s weird Napoleon school life lacks things also he doesn’t have many friends and is not well liked by the jocks who push him into lockers. Unlike the hero role where the person is popular and well liked by everybody. Napoleon is the exact opposite he has no friends and people don’t seem to like him. He does stand up for himself and put’s up a fight like other hero’s would do.
He’s has more of a goofy sense to him then a serious sense. He’s unpredictable whether his hurling casserole at his grandmothers llama or putting tatter tots in his pockets. Napoleon says what’s on his mind and doesn’t care who he’s saying it to. Even though napoleon get’s pushed around he doesn’t change himself or his ways.
An example is when he’s trying to get a ride to the dance after trying to get his uncle to drive him he hitches a ride in a low rider and Also when that kid is being bullied Napoleon tells him to vote for Pedro and you’ll be protected which the hero does in a movie always helps out people in need
He does whatever it takes to get there doesn’t give up like a true hero does.
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