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Scarf park Posted 9 years ago
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technology making a breakthrough the way people communicate with other.Technology has impact on numerous way and i point of this way this have both pros and cons effect.

technology has affected relationships in business, education and many thing of modern life. Firstly, in the world of business and education, video conferring help people all over the planet can communicate without travelling.

  

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These are not good sentences. There are many problems in the grammar. First make corrections according to the following two rules: 1.

  • These are not good sentences.
  • There are many problems in the grammar.
  • First make corrections according to the following two rules: 1.
  • Every sentence begins with a capital letter.
  • 2.
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These are not good sentences. There are many problems in the grammar.
First make corrections according to the following two rules:

1. Every sentence begins with a capital letter.

2. When you write "i", you are talking about the ninth letter of the English alphabet. The personal pronoun is always capital i. (I)

After you make those corrections, post your new version.

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