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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Can you help me correct a short text?
Can you help me correct a short text? The text is for a innovation and invention contest. My product is a hanger. The text is as follows: Our hanger is for clothes as well as for blankets and bed covers. With joint our hanger can be extended or collapsed, so you can store it easily.
The advantages of our product are:
1. The size of our hanger can be changed easily so you can hang a piece of clothing or bed covers as well.
2. Our hanger can be collapsed, so it saves space for storage.
3. Either extending or collapsing, you can operate it easily.
The advantages of our product are:
1. The size of our hanger can be changed easily so you can hang a piece of clothing or bed covers as well.
2. Our hanger can be collapsed, so it saves space for storage.
3. Either extending or collapsing, you can operate it easily.
Top answer
Our hanger is for blankets and bed covers as well as for clothes. The jointed hanger can easily be extended or collapsed, so you can store it easily. You don't need the numbered points because they just repeat the first sentences.
- Our hanger is for blankets and bed covers as well as for clothes.
- The jointed hanger can easily be extended or collapsed, so you can store it easily.
- You don't need the numbered points because they just repeat the first sentences.
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Our hanger is for blankets and bed covers as well as for clothes. The jointed hanger can easily be extended or collapsed, so you can store it easily.
You don't need the numbered points because they just repeat the first sentences.
You don't need the numbered points because they just repeat the first sentences.
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