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The table shows the export values of various products in 1997 and 2010.

The table compares the values (in billions of HK dollars) of five different products exported over a 14-year period starting from 1997.

As can be seen from the table, metals exports were the sector that showed the largest growth over the period given. However, export of telecommunity products contributed to the total revenue the most.

With regard to the value of telecommunity exports, it significantly rose from 7.9 in 1997 to nearly 13 billion HK dollars in 2010. Likewise, there was an increase of around 1 billion HK dollars in the revenue of equipment. Metals also saw a major boost in value during the period, with an increase of 122% to 5.1 billion in 2010.

Among the remaining export products, both clothing and manufacturing underwent a slight drop, which ended at 5 and 4 billion in 2010 respectively. The total earnings in the final year increased by one fifth, from 32 billion to 38.4 at the end of the period.

  

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This is not a good task. " "Manufacturing" is not a product. The table compares the values (in billions of HK dollars) of five different products exported over a 14-year period starting from 1997.

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  • This is not a good task.
  • " "Manufacturing" is not a product.
  • The table compares the values (in billions of HK dollars) of five different products exported over a 14-year period starting from 1997.
  • That is a good phrase for a line graph which shows continuous data for 14 years.
  • It is not a good phrase for a table with only two data points, 1997 and 2010.
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This is not a good task. There is no such thing as "telecommunity." "Manufacturing" is not a product.

The table compares the values (in billions of HK dollars) of five different products exported over a 14-year period starting from 1997.

That is a good phrase for a line graph which shows continuous data for 14 years. It is no

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