Can you help me check my writing task 2 ielts?

1.Most people do not care enough about environmental issues.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,there are many environment problems in our earth. However, majority of people do not pay attention enough about environmental issues.

There are some main reasons for this situation. Firstly, people are too busy with their wprk and life and they do not have time to care about environment. For example, a person works from morning until late afternoon, then they must care for their children and so their time does not spend for environmental issues. Secondly, people are not aware of environment problems or they ignore them. Because the majority of environmental issues does not affect too much on daily life, people do not pay attention for it enough.Last but not least, people do not think that environmental issues are important.

In my personal view, I suggest some solutions for this situation. We can release environment campaigns to raise awareness of people about environmental issues. Moreover, in each city, establishing environment club is a good way to encourage people join hands to protect our earth and spread environment message to everyone.

In conclusion, some people are very active in environment activities, however, the majority of population do not care enough about environment problems. Therefore, we should raise awareness of people about this problem.