Can you help me check my writing task 1 ielts?2.2.

2.The graphs below show the post-school qualifications held by Canadians in the age groups 25 to 35 and 45 to 55.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

The two pie charts demonstrate the qualification in some aspects of canadian aged between 25 and 35 and 35 to 45. There are nine fields mentioned in graph
What stands out is that social science and art account for largest proportion in both pie charts(21% and 20%). Administration and education also take high percentage in the graph, 19% and 15% for age between 45 and 55

.In contrast, the percentage of CAnadians hold a degree in humanities,nursing,MBA is quite low. It occupies 17% and 19% for three aspects together in age from 25 to 35 and 45 to 55 .

Finally, there is a opposite in the percentage of science, math, computer and engineering in both pie charts.Canadians aged between 25 and 35, having qualification in engineering account for 9%,in science, mathe, computer take 18%. On the contrary, the proportion of degree in science, math computer of Canadians between 45 and 55 is only 10% and in engineering is pretty high, 19%. We can recognize that the younger people is better at science, math and computer than the older.

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