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1.The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on fuel.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates how people in US and UK spend on fuel. It is noticeable that the tendency of using fuel in these countries is different.
In United Sated, it can be seen that the poorest people spend more proportion in their income for fuel than the richest people. On average, poorest class spends about 5% of their income for fuel while middle-income class in UK spends about 3% of their income for fuel. And the richest people spend most on fuel, about 4% of their income.
In general, people in US spend more proportion of their income for fuel than those in UK. An interesting point is that the tendency of using money on fuel in US and UK is absolutely opposite.
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