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Bsss10 Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

Can you help me check my short paragrapgs Thank you

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00I am not sure whether thess paragraphs make sense in terms of grammar and semantics. 02br
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001. Greatness is a vague concept that is heavily dependent on a person's perspective and biases. Therefore, I would like to clarify the definition of the word “greatness.” It means that those who make a great contribution to their society should garner a reputation for greatness.02br
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002. Martin Kuther King, the civil rights leader, and Rosa Park, the founder of bus boycott, were against segregation laws in order for blacks to enjoy the same rights as whites. Their contemporaries esteemed both of them as a great hero and heroin. 02br
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003. Chiang Ching Kuo, the former Taiwan's President, implemented Ten Major Construction Programs, which built the foundation of Taiwan's economic development; moreover, Lee Kuo Ting, the former Taiwan's economic minister, carried out the plan of high-tech Industry Park, enabling Taiwan's economy to be prosperous. 02br
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0Hi,02br 02br 01font 001. Greatness is a vague concept that is heavily dependent on a person's perspective and biases. Therefore, I would like to clarify the definition.

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  • Greatness is a vague concept that is heavily dependent on a person's perspective and biases.
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  • Martin 01font 00L02font 00uther King, the civil rights leader, and Rosa Park01font 00s02font 00, the founder of the bus boycott, were against segregation laws in order for blacks to enjoy the same rights as whites.
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0 With all due respect, I don't think your definition of the "greatness" did much to make your "vague concept" word any less unclear. (I think my sentence is rather vague too.) 0-

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