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Bsss10 Posted 20 years ago
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Can you help me check my sentences? Thank you very much.

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00I made some sentences, but I am not sure whether they are right or not.02pre
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00If you find something wrong in Grammar or vocabulary, help me check them.02pre
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001.00Technological innovations are aimed at improving all aspects 02pre
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00Technological innovations are aimed at improving all aspects 01pre 02pre 02br 02br 00of people’s lives or lifes. 01font 00lives02font 01pre 02pre 02br 02br 00 01pre 02pre 02br 02br 002. Doctors can take advantage of these technological 01pre 02pre 02br 02br 00innovations to cure a range of diseases such as 01font 00cancer(s02font 01font 00)02font 00, 01pre 02pre 02br 02br 00heart disease, stroke, diabetes01font 00, which02font 00 that were regarded 01font 00as 02font 00lethal 01pre 02pre 02br 02br 01font 00(02font 00ones01font 00)02font 00 in ancient times01font 00 (only)02font 00 01font 00a few years ago02font 00.

  • 00Technological innovations are aimed at improving all aspects 01pre 02pre 02br 02br 00of people’s lives or lifes.
  • 01font 00lives02font 01pre 02pre 02br 02br 00 01pre 02pre 02br 02br 002.
  • Doctors can take advantage of these technological 01pre 02pre 02br 02br 00innovations to cure a range of diseases such as 01font 00cancer(s02font 01font 00)02font 00, 01pre 02pre 02br 02br 00heart disease, stroke, diabetes01font 00, which02font 00 that were regarded 01font 00as 02font 00lethal 01pre 02pre 02br 02br 01font 00(02font 00ones01font 00)02font 00 in ancient times01font 00 (only)02font 00 01font 00a few years ago02font 00.
  • 01pre 02pre 02br 02br 00 01pre 02pre 02br 02br 003.
  • ) 02font 00economic development 01pre 02pre 02br 02br 00is dependent 01font 00depends 02font 00on how developed its technological advancement is.
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