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Ellee Posted 15 years ago
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"Soon the country became much lower, and the ground became not as dry and hard. In front, blurred in the hot trembling air, there appeared a dark stripe of willow thickets. The oxen, smelling the water, went faster, Chiledu’s horse raised its head and moved its (pricked up) his ears."
I'm not sure if you say so in English. Can you help rephrase it into natural English if needed?
I'm not sure if you say so in English. Can you help rephrase it into natural English if needed?
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Soon the countryside became much lower, and the land became more soft and wet . Blurred in the hot trembling air , a dark strip of willow thickets appeared in front of them. The oxen, smelling water , plodded faster , and Chiledu’s horse raised its head and pricked up its ears.
- Soon the countryside became much lower, and the land became more soft and wet .
- Blurred in the hot trembling air , a dark strip of willow thickets appeared in front of them.
- The oxen, smelling water , plodded faster , and Chiledu’s horse raised its head and pricked up its ears.
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Soon the countryside became much lower, and the land became more soft and wet. Blurred in the hot trembling air, a dark strip of willow thickets appeared in front of them. The oxen, smelling water, plodded faster, and Chiledu’s horse raised its head and pricked up its ears.
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