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Candle slide 20 Posted 7 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Can you help I prepare the grammar error for the writing assay

Hello everyone, today Anna interviewed some tourists. The first was a girl, her name was Sabrina, she came from Bangladesh and she is Bangladeshi, she loved history so she often walks around and looks at all the monuments and memorials, especially, Sabrina really liked Lincon memorial because she felt like Abraham Lincon is still alive. The second was a guy, he was Luis, his country was China so he can speak two languages which are Chinese and English, he liked museums because he really loved the art museums. The finally was a girl who came from Iran, her name was Mehnoush, she loved learning about government and politicians, especially, Mehnoush wanted to see the U.S capital

Anna felt Washington city very interesting, she really liked her job and good friends. Today, Masha came to visit Anna, she wanted to go to the movie with Anna. Masha asked Anna: “Are you busy this Thursday at 6 pm ?” but Anna must go to tap dance with her friends on Thursday night. And Friday night, Masha is going to visit her parents, then they will have dinner and play board games together. After Anna saw her schedule again, she asked Masha: “I’m not busy on Monday night. Are you?”, unfortunately, Masha must go to the jog with friends at a park so she suggested Anna: “We will go to the movie on Wednesday night”, but Anna has to teach Ukulele for children. Finally, they decided to go to the movie right now and the errands will complete on Sunday. Yes, let’s go!

Anna’s major is the read news and today is Anna’s first time so her boss is here to help her. Ms.Weaver said: “When we read the news, we are always reading facts, we never show our feelings”, but then everything seems very bad when Anna didn’t control her emotion, so the news is paused by Ms.Weaver

  

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htm Also, learn the difference between assay and essay. An assay is an analysis of materials, usually in chemistry. An essay is a composition of writing, which develops a main thesis.

  • htm Also, learn the difference between assay and essay.
  • An assay is an analysis of materials, usually in chemistry.
  • An essay is a composition of writing, which develops a main thesis.
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Post essays in the essay forum:

https://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htm


Also, learn the difference between assay and essay.

An assay is an analysis of materials, usually in chemistry.

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This is three sentences all mashed together. End each sentence with a full stop (period). You tend to write simple sentences, and then stick them together. This makes your writing very choppy.

Also, chick your spelling.

The first was a girl, her name was Sabrina, she came from Bangladesh and she is Bangladeshi, she loved history so she often walks around and looks at

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