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Yiwei Liu Posted 14 years ago
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Can you help check this sentence?Thank you

My hobby is to make pottery wares, as the whole process of mud to become a beautiful china makes me seem to see my own life trajectory.
  

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Yiwei Liu , Your sentence makes no sense. Can you write it in another way?

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Yiwei Liu ,
Your sentence makes no sense. Can you write it in another way?
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OK~Thanks to your reply.In this senternce I want to express two points
1.my hobby is to make pottery
2.The reason is the whole making process:a raw clay to become a pottery can meke me seemly see my own life locus

Can you help me check it again?
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OK~Thanks to your reply.In this senternce I want to express two points1.my hobby is to make pottery2.The reason is the whole making process:a raw clay to become a pottery can meke me seemly see my own life locusCan you help me check it again?
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My hobby is pottery (or ceramics). The process of transforming mud into beautiful china reminds me of (or is a metaphor for) my own life.
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Ok, There are more than one way to express your points. This is how I would say it: 
My hobby is [making] pottery because the whole process of turning raw clay into beautiful pottery seems to help me see and focus my life.
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Awesome!Thank you very much~But if you have spare time, can you go to my page and help me check my motivation letter~I know it is an impolite requirement. But I am really very anxious about my motivation letter writting to apply for my mater programme in 2013.As a Chinese, I can not write very well.
But if you do not have enough time, that is OK. you have helped me a lot~Thank you again~Wish y
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Awesome!Thank you very much~But if you have spare time, can you go to my page and help me check my motivation letter~I know it is an impolite requirement. But I am really very anxious about my motivation letter writting to apply for my mater programme in 2013.As a Chinese, I can not write very well.
But if you do not have enough time, that is OK. you have helped me a lot~Thank you again~
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