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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Can you guys tell me if there's any mistake here?
I am student and technology lover. Bringing my knowledge from various field, I can make projects get off the ground and actually become lucrative products that brings value. Doesn't matter the size or the difficult, I have the ability to exceed the defined goals.
Even I don't have longer experiences, I do have a good amount of knowledge that I conquered through my past works and my self, I am always trying to be a step ahead and reach my aspirations. I have a lot of study and experience with XXX, XXX, XXX, XXX and XXX.
Currently I am graduating on XXX at XXX
Even I don't have longer experiences, I do have a good amount of knowledge that I conquered through my past works and my self, I am always trying to be a step ahead and reach my aspirations. I have a lot of study and experience with XXX, XXX, XXX, XXX and XXX.
Currently I am graduating on XXX at XXX
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Anonymous Can you guys tell me if there's any mistake here? Yes, there is. Please proofread your text yourself, and I am sure that you will discover the most obvious problems.
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AnonymousCan you guys tell me if there's any mistake here?Yes, there is. Please proofread your text yourself, and I am sure that you will discover the most obvious problems. Post your revised text here and we will check it again.
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Ok, I'm not a native speaker of English, so I can't catch some mistakes. I made a little changes tho.
I am student and a technology lover. Bringing my knowledge from various field, I can make projects get off the ground and actually become lucrative products that brings value. Doesn't matter the size or the difficult, I have the ability to exceed the defined goals.
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I am student and a technology lover. Bringing my knowledge from various field, I can make projects get off the ground and actually become lucrative products that brings value. Doesn't matter the size or the difficult, I have the ability to exceed the defined goals.
Even
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That's a little better.
I am a student and a technology lover. Bringing knowledge from various fields, I can get projects off the ground to become lucrative products that bring value. Whatever the size or difficulty, I have the ability to exceed the defined goals.
I have considerable knowledge acquired through my past work and study. I am always trying to be a step ahea
I am a student and a technology lover. Bringing knowledge from various fields, I can get projects off the ground to become lucrative products that bring value. Whatever the size or difficulty, I have the ability to exceed the defined goals.
I have considerable knowledge acquired through my past work and study. I am always trying to be a step ahea
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Thank you very much Mister,
That was very kind of you. Sorry for my bad English, I'm studying to improve it.
That was very kind of you. Sorry for my bad English, I'm studying to improve it.
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