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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Can you guys tell me if there's any mistake here?

I am student and technology lover. Bringing my knowledge from various field, I can make projects get off the ground and actually become lucrative products that brings value. Doesn't matter the size or the difficult, I have the ability to exceed the defined goals.

Even I don't have longer experiences, I do have a good amount of knowledge that I conquered through my past works and my self, I am always trying to be a step ahead and reach my aspirations. I have a lot of study and experience with XXX, XXX, XXX, XXX and XXX.

Currently I am graduating on XXX at XXX
  

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Anonymous Can you guys tell me if there's any mistake here? Yes, there is. Please proofread your text yourself, and I am sure that you will discover the most obvious problems.

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  • Please proofread your text yourself, and I am sure that you will discover the most obvious problems.
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AnonymousCan you guys tell me if there's any mistake here?
Yes, there is. Please proofread your text yourself, and I am sure that you will discover the most obvious problems. Post your revised text here and we will check it again.
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Ok, I'm not a native speaker of English, so I can't catch some mistakes. I made a little changes tho.

I am student and a technology lover. Bringing my knowledge from various field, I can make projects get off the ground and actually become lucrative products that brings value. Doesn't matter the size or the difficult, I have the ability to exceed the defined goals.

Even
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That's a little better.

I am a student and a technology lover. Bringing knowledge from various fields, I can get projects off the ground to become lucrative products that bring value. Whatever the size or difficulty, I have the ability to exceed the defined goals.

I have considerable knowledge acquired through my past work and study. I am always trying to be a step ahea
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Thank you very much Mister,

That was very kind of you. Sorry for my bad English, I'm studying to improve it.

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