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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
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can you guys help me with these sentences (grammer, structure ect.)

0 As an assistant to Joe Shmo, one of the top realtors in Seattle area, gained valuable experience in a business environment working in the real estate industry.02br
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00 Acted as a liaison between the buyer and the Agent by interpreting between two parties while going step by step towards succesful closing on a property02br
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00 Created personalized marketing campaign which targeted Russian community currently in the market for Real Estate. 0-
  

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02br 02br 00Acted as liaison between buyer and Agent, while working towards succesful closing on a property02br 02br 00Created personalized marketing campaign which targeted Russian community currently in the market for Real Estate. 02font 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive0-

— Clive

  • 02br 02br 00Acted as liaison between buyer and Agent, while working towards succesful closing on a property02br 02br 00Created personalized marketing campaign which targeted Russian community currently in the market for Real Estate.
  • 02font 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive0-
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01font00As assistant to Joe Shmo, one of the top realtors in Seattle area, gained valuable business experience working in the real estate industry.02br
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00Acted as liaison between buyer and Agent, while working towards succesful closing on a property02br
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