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Babyblue_girl08 Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Can you guys correct this please
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00 After reading this letter, I feel lucky that I live in a safe area and I don’t need to worry about the street light and left the house with no one watch 01 u 00 02 u 00 over it. Back in the 00 I have been living there several years but I didn’t heard any crime and I don’t have any problems with my neighbors. Every time I got home late from school I felt safe because of the street light. 02 br
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00 On summer day we used to go to my cousins house for our vacation. Every time we leave the house my mom felts scared because no one watches our house. I always said to her 01 u 00 02 u 00 “Mom just turns the light on, so that everyone thinks someone in the house and they 01 u 00 don’t 02 u 00 have any attentions to steal something in our house 01 i 00 ” 02 i 00 I 01 i 00 02 i 00 know she 00 00 worried to left 00 00 the house for long time and no one watching over it. After our vacation we got back home safe 01 u 00 02 u 00 and I felt glad that nothing had been stolen from our house. I think the reason that makes the 01 u 00 02 u 00 place safe were I live is because of the street lights. 02 br
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00 I understand how Ernesto Meza writes this letter to the city of 00 because he is concerns about the safety in his area. I know street lights are really important to us, because its can make us safe. So I hope the city of 00 will do any action for them. 0-
00 i need correction for my paragraph,could someone help, please! 02 h3
00 In the letter written by Ernesto Meza to City of 00 , he tells about his concerns and his neighbors 01 u 00 02 u 00 concerns about missing lights in their area. He have mentions some crime that happened in their area because of the failure of the street light. I feel disappointed to the City of 00 because since lots of letter had sent to them but they didn’t do any 01 u 00 02 u 00 actions. I know Ernesto and his neighbors all they want it 00 00 just a street light so that they can be safe. 02 br02 br
00 After reading this letter, I feel lucky that I live in a safe area and I don’t need to worry about the street light and left the house with no one watch 01 u 00 02 u 00 over it. Back in the 00 I have been living there several years but I didn’t heard any crime and I don’t have any problems with my neighbors. Every time I got home late from school I felt safe because of the street light. 02 br
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00 On summer day we used to go to my cousins house for our vacation. Every time we leave the house my mom felts scared because no one watches our house. I always said to her 01 u 00 02 u 00 “Mom just turns the light on, so that everyone thinks someone in the house and they 01 u 00 don’t 02 u 00 have any attentions to steal something in our house 01 i 00 ” 02 i 00 I 01 i 00 02 i 00 know she 00 00 worried to left 00 00 the house for long time and no one watching over it. After our vacation we got back home safe 01 u 00 02 u 00 and I felt glad that nothing had been stolen from our house. I think the reason that makes the 01 u 00 02 u 00 place safe were I live is because of the street lights. 02 br
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00 I understand how Ernesto Meza writes this letter to the city of 00 because he is concerns about the safety in his area. I know street lights are really important to us, because its can make us safe. So I hope the city of 00 will do any action for them. 0-
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02 br 01 i 00 I have underlined some problem areas: 02 i 02 br 02 br 00 In 01 u 00 the 02 u 00 letter written by Ernesto Meza 01 u 00 to City 02 u 00 of Stockton, he tells about his concerns and his 01 u 00 neighbors 02 u 00 concerns about missing lights in their area. He 01 u 00 have mentions 02 u 00 some crime that happened in their area because of the failure of the street light. I feel disappointed 01 u 00 to 02 u 00 the City of Stockton because 01 del 00 since 02 del 00 01 u 00 lots of letter 02 u 00 01 u 00 had sent 02 u 00 to them but they didn’t 01 u 00 do any actions 02 u 00 .
- 02 br 01 i 00 I have underlined some problem areas: 02 i 02 br 02 br 00 In 01 u 00 the 02 u 00 letter written by Ernesto Meza 01 u 00 to City 02 u 00 of Stockton, he tells about his concerns and his 01 u 00 neighbors 02 u 00 concerns about missing lights in their area.
- He 01 u 00 have mentions 02 u 00 some crime that happened in their area because of the failure of the street light.
- I feel disappointed 01 u 00 to 02 u 00 the City of Stockton because 01 del 00 since 02 del 00 01 u 00 lots of letter 02 u 00 01 u 00 had sent 02 u 00 to them but they didn’t 01 u 00 do any actions 02 u 00 .
- I know Ernesto and his 01 u 00 neighbors all 02 u 00 they want 01 u 00 it 02 u 00 00 just a street light so that they can be safe.
- 02 br 00 After reading this letter, I feel lucky that I live in a safe area and I don’t need to worry about the street light 01 u 00 and left 02 u 00 the house with no 01 u 00 one watch 02 u 00 over it.
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00 In 01 u 00 the 02 u 00 letter written by Ernesto Meza 01 u 00 to City 02 u 00 of Stockton, he tells about his concerns and his 01 u 00 neighbors 02 u 00 concerns about missing lights in their area. He 01 u 00 have mentions 02
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00 In 01 u 00 the 02 u 00 letter written by Ernesto Meza 01 u 00 to City 02 u 00 of Stockton, he tells about his concerns and his 01 u 00 neighbors 02 u 00 concerns about missing lights in their area. He 01 u 00 have mentions 02
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