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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Can you give me advice on how to make 2 sentences better?
#1 The flight was quick since I slept through it. The flight lasted an hour and a half.
#2 Finally my turn, I waited behind the white line for the customs agent to cue me over to the booth. I handed him my passport which prompted a couple of questions : “Why are you here miss?” and “How long are you staying?” He took my prints, a picture and asked me to kindly follow the agent he was pointing at.
Regards
#1 The flight was quick since I slept through it. The flight lasted an hour and a half.
#2 Finally my turn, I waited behind the white line for the customs agent to cue me over to the booth. I handed him my passport which prompted a couple of questions : “Why are you here miss?” and “How long are you staying?” He took my prints, a picture and asked me to kindly follow the agent he was pointing at.
Regards
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1. The flight lasted an hour and a half, but I slept through it so it passed quickly. 2.
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- The flight lasted an hour and a half, but I slept through it so it passed quickly.
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- Finally it was my turn.
- I waited behind the white line for the immigration officer to beckon me over to the booth.
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1. The flight lasted an hour and a half, but I slept through it so it passed quickly.
2. Finally it was my turn. I waited behind the white line for the immigration officer to beckon me over to the booth. I handed him my passport which prompted a couple of questions: “What is the purpose of your visit, miss?” and “How long are you staying?” He took my prints, a picture and asked me to kind
2. Finally it was my turn. I waited behind the white line for the immigration officer to beckon me over to the booth. I handed him my passport which prompted a couple of questions: “What is the purpose of your visit, miss?” and “How long are you staying?” He took my prints, a picture and asked me to kind
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