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Kk Posted 21 years ago
Grammar

Can you give me a hand with my poor English sentences? Thank you.

Hello, 
I am not sure whether the three sentences make sense in term of grammar and semantics. 
Can you give me a hand with checking them 
Thank you for your help.


1. The price of a restaurant food is twice even more as much as the cost of food materials we prepare.

2. After I quit a convenient store part-time job, I got plenty of time to focus on my studies, which helped my grades in all subjects improved.

3.One of the advantages of a large shopping center built in close proximity to my hometown is that I can spend quality time with my family at a restaurant in this shopping center.
  

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1. The price of restaurant food is more than twice that of food prepared at home. 2.

— Mister Micawber

  • 1.
  • The price of restaurant food is more than twice that of food prepared at home.
  • 2.
  • After I quit my part-time job in a convenience store, I had plenty of time to focus on my studies, which helped all my grades improve.
  • One advantage of a large shopping center near my hometown is that I can spend quality time with my family at a restaurant there.
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1. The price of restaurant food is more than twice that of food prepared at home.

2. After I quit my part-time job in a convenience store, I had plenty of time to focus on my studies, which helped all my grades improve.
3.One advantage of a large shopping center near my hometown is that I can spend quality time with my family at a restaurant there.
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