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Kk Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

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00I made some sentences, but I am not sure whether they are right or not.02pre
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00If you find something wrong in Grammar or vocabulary, help me check them.02pre
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001. Most workers are devoted most of their time to performing their tasks in order to get promotion and amass a great fortune in the competitive job market at the expense of the opportunities of meeting the opposite sex. 02br
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002. Most workers are devoted most of their time to performing their tasks in order to get promotion and amass a great fortune in the competitive job market. This might lose many opportunities of meeting the opposite sex. 02br
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00Which sentence is clear? 02br
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003. Lin Hwai Min has a real talent for creating beautiful dance performances that conceal/ hide many connotative meaning most people can understand. 02br
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00Which word 01i00conceal or hide02i00 can work in the above sentence?02br
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004. The purpose of science is not merely limited to confirm something/ to confirmation. 02br
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00I am not sure how to use "be limited to noun or verb.''0-
  

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0Hi,02br 02br 01font 001. Most workers devote most of their time to performing their tasks, in order to get promotion and amass a great fortune in the competitive job market, at the expense of opportunities to meet. 02font 02br 02br 01font 002.

— Clive

  • 0Hi,02br 02br 01font 001.
  • Most workers devote most of their time to performing their tasks, in order to get promotion and amass a great fortune in the competitive job market, at the expense of opportunities to meet.
  • 02font 02br 02br 01font 002.
  • Most workers devote most of their time to performing their tasks, in order to get promotion and amass a great fortune in the competitive job market.
  • This causes them to lose many opportunities of meeting the opposite ***.
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01font001. Most workers devote most of their time to performing their tasks, in order to get promotion and amass a great fortune in the competitive job market, at the expense of opportunities to meet. 02font02br
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01font002. Most workers devote most of their time to performin
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1font00Hello Clive02font02br
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01font00Do the two sentences sound clear to you? If they are awkward, help me correct them. 02font02br
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01font00Thank you02font02br
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01font001.Lin Hwai Min ha
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01font001.Lin Hwai Min has a real talent for creating beautiful dance performances that have many connotative meanings most people can not understand. 00Good. Except I recommend 'connotations' rather than connotative meanings'.02font02br
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01font002. The purpose of science
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