<b>I need to revise the following sentences. However, I'm not sure what I did wrong. I'd really appericiate any help. Thank you so much!</b><br/><br/><ul> <li>At the same time, a five foot five, one hundred<br/>and fifty pound, average women passes by.</li> <li>Of course the first women with her lanky body<br/>and perfect bone structure is going to stand out. </li> <li>While the first women should still be the one to<br/>stand out as unusual, it’s the opposite. </li> <li>The average women would be seen as odd,<br/>undesirable, and unwanted.</li></ul>