Can you fix for me this essay? please give out my mistakes, suggestion to improve better and grade it by IELTS scale
Here's some points I have come up:
1- In what way has technology has affected human relationships?
A- Share information - people share their opinion on forum site like Reddit, Tumblr, etc. ; looking for advice is readily apparent on internet
b- Contact your family, friends while traveling overseas or living afar
C-
D-
2- How has the impact of technology been negative for human relationship?
A- Privacy intruded - People expose other's information without their permission and post it for entertainment
B- Cyber-bullying - Information can be find everywhere that anyone could see and intently use this as a threat
C - Isolation- Though technology was purposely to bring people together, but it has unintentionally drift people away from reality
D-
P/s: Do I need to fill out all 8 points?
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Phung Thanh Huyen Her e are some points I have come up with : Very good. Now write each of these points as a proper (grammatical) sentence. Phung Thanh Huyen P/s: Do I need to fill write out all 8 five points?
- Phung Thanh Huyen Her e are some points I have come up with : Very good.
- Now write each of these points as a proper (grammatical) sentence.
- Phung Thanh Huyen P/s: Do I need to fill write out all 8 five points?
- Yes, do that and post them below.
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Phung Thanh HuyenHere are some points I have come up with:
Very good. Now write each of these points as a proper (grammatical) sentence.
Phung Thanh HuyenP/s:Do I need tofill
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