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Phung Thanh Huyen Posted 9 years ago
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Can you fix for me this essay? please give out my mistakes, suggestion to improve better and grade it by IELTS scale
Human interaction throughout the year has changed due to the development of technology advanced as it has become essential part of our lives. From personal view, I think it has negative impact on our society than benefit.
Is this introduction clear enough?
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Phung Thanh Huyen Is this introduction clear enough? No. I asked you to just post your position (where you stand on the issue)!
- Phung Thanh Huyen Is this introduction clear enough?
- No.
- I asked you to just post your position (where you stand on the issue)!
- Phung Thanh Huyen I think it modern technology has had an overall negative impact on human relationships.
- our society than benefit.
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Phung Thanh HuyenIs this introduction clear enough?
No. I asked you to just post your position (where you stand on the issue)!
Phung Thanh HuyenI thinkitmodern technology has had an overall negative impact on human re
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