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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Can you find the mistakes?

When he developed the software, they don't let him for try. So he stolen damaged robot and given new programming the first robot with the ability to think and feel for himself. He escaped by gansters. They need money. He programmed the damaged robot nearly them. When the robot back to life, it like a baby and should learn everything. Yolandi names it Chappie and love it like a motherbut. But he teach Chappie bad things. By the time Chappie like gangsters as ninja. Ninja use Chappie their evil things. She hate him because he designed a robot named moose. Moose is soldier and very strong but nobody wants him design everyone esteern him. He chase him and jealous him. He is doing everything to destroy Chappie. Can you find my mistakes and correct them?
  

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When he developed the software, he wasn't allowed to use it. they don't let him for try. So he stol e a damaged robot and given new programming the first robot with the ability programmed it to be able to think and feel for itself.

— Teechr

  • When he developed the software, he wasn't allowed to use it.
  • they don't let him for try.
  • So he stol e a damaged robot and given new programming the first robot with the ability programmed it to be able to think and feel for itself.
  • himself.
  • He was running away from escaped by gan g sters who were asking him for .
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When he developed the software, he wasn't allowed to use it. they don't let him for try. So he stole a damaged robot and given new programming the first robot with the ability programmed it to be able to think and feel for itself. himself. He was running away from escaped by gangsters who were asking hi
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