Can you evaluate my accent please

Tell me my weaknesses and the areas that I need to work on. I have uploaded two different records of the same text. Tell me which one sounds better or both are terrible? And what kind of accent do I have?

http://www.zshare.net/audio/916933121a993bc9/

http://www.zshare.net/audio/91693374193cd109/

Thanks!

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