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Julie_loc Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Can you edit this paragraph? please!?

The Curious Incident of the dog in the Night-time is a great book to compare to The Boy in the striped pajamas because both characters are trying to understand what is happening in their lives. For example, the main character in “the Curious Incident of the dog in the Night-Time” is a fifteen year old autistic boy who is not only in search for the murder of his favorite dog, but also the answers to aspects of his life that he does not understand and the main character in “The Boy in the striped pajamas” is a nine year old Boy Bruno who is on a quest for understanding why he is moving to Auschwitz and wants to know what is happening in the world.
The difference between the 2 characters is that Jona is Boy who has autism and a disability that is capable of affecting every aspect of life and Bruno is a nine year old boy, like any typical young boy is adventurous and lacks the social understanding to know about what is happening around him.
  

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I have underlined some problem areas. If you post a revised text here, we will review it again. The Curious Incident of the dog in the Night-time is a great book to compare to The Boy in the striped pajamas because both characters are trying to understand what is happening in their lives.

  • I have underlined some problem areas.
  • If you post a revised text here, we will review it again.
  • The Curious Incident of the dog in the Night-time is a great book to compare to The Boy in the striped pajamas because both characters are trying to understand what is happening in their lives.
  • For example, the main character in “the Curious Incident of the dog in the Night-Time” is a fifteen year old autistic boy who is not only in search for the murder of his favorite dog, but also the answers to aspects of his life that he does not underst and and the main character in “The Boy in the striped pajamas” is a nine year old Boy Bruno who is on a quest for understanding why he is moving to Auschwitz and wants to know what is happening in the world.
  • The difference between the 2 characters is that Jona is Boy who has autism and a disability that is capable of affecting every aspect of life and Bruno is a nine year old bo y, li ke any typical young boy is adventurous and lacks the social understand ing to know about what is happening around him.
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I have underlined some problem areas. If you post a revised text here, we will review it again.

The Curious Incident of the dog in the Night-time is a great book to compare to The Boy in the striped pajamas because both characters are trying to understand what is happening in their lives. For example, the main character in “the Curious Incident of the dog in the N
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"The Curious Incident of the dog in the Night-time" is a great book to compare to "The Boy in the striped pajamas" because both characters are trying to understand what is happening in their lives. For example, the main character in “The Curious Incident of the dog in the Night-Time” is a fifteen year old autistic boy who is not only in search for the murder of his favorite dog, but also the answ
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The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-time is a great book to compare to The Boy in the Striped Pajamas because both characters are trying to understand what is happening in their lives. For example, the main character in The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time is a fifteen-year-old autistic boy, Jona, who is in search of
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Julie, someone told me books books are underlined when doing formal writing but it was a long time ago, but, i would love to learn from your mistakes so please do share them. thanks
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Hello, konektics - and welcome to English Forums. In the old days, book titles were underlined in typed and written texts to represent italics, which are used in published works. Today, the computer is capable of producing italics for most students' papers, so they should be used in place of underlining.

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