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Julie_loc Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
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Dear Karl, Daniel, and Martin,
I no longer live in Berlin. I am now living in a new house in "Out-with.” At the new house, my father says that I will understand some day why we are living here, but no matter how many times I tell him it was a bad idea, he won’t let us move back. I hate it here. It is empty and desolate. It is smaller than my house in Berlin and only has three floors. In this house, there are no cubbyholes or secret rooms for me to explore. It is very boring and ugly. There is nothing to do and no one to play with except for my sister Gretel. It is far away from the city. There is nothing to laugh or be happy about in this house. This house makes me feel empty and cold inside because it is in the middle of nowhere. I don’t think this will ever be my home. Luckily, I recently discovered one thing good about this place. While I was unpacking, I walked over to a large window at the back of my room and looked out of it. What I saw was very interesting. In the distance, I saw a beautiful garden with flowers, and a bench with a plaque on it. Further along the flower garden, I saw a very large fence and a lot of hard ground.
Write back soon!
You loving friend,
Bruno
I no longer live in Berlin. I am now living in a new house in "Out-with.” At the new house, my father says that I will understand some day why we are living here, but no matter how many times I tell him it was a bad idea, he won’t let us move back. I hate it here. It is empty and desolate. It is smaller than my house in Berlin and only has three floors. In this house, there are no cubbyholes or secret rooms for me to explore. It is very boring and ugly. There is nothing to do and no one to play with except for my sister Gretel. It is far away from the city. There is nothing to laugh or be happy about in this house. This house makes me feel empty and cold inside because it is in the middle of nowhere. I don’t think this will ever be my home. Luckily, I recently discovered one thing good about this place. While I was unpacking, I walked over to a large window at the back of my room and looked out of it. What I saw was very interesting. In the distance, I saw a beautiful garden with flowers, and a bench with a plaque on it. Further along the flower garden, I saw a very large fence and a lot of hard ground.
Write back soon!
You loving friend,
Bruno
Top answer
Hi Julie_loc; Your letter is excellent. I have only a minor suggestion. Dear Karl, Daniel, and Martin, I no longer live in Berlin.
- Hi Julie_loc; Your letter is excellent.
- I have only a minor suggestion.
- Dear Karl, Daniel, and Martin, I no longer live in Berlin.
- ” At the new house, my father says that I will understand some day why we are living here, but no matter how many times I tell him it was a bad idea, he won’t let us move back.
- I hate it here.
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Hi Julie_loc;
Your letter is excellent. I have only a minor suggestion.
Dear Karl, Daniel, and Martin,
I no longer live in Berlin. I am now living in a new house in "Out-with.” At the new house, my father says that I will understand some day why we are living here, but no matter how many times I tell him it was a bad idea, he won’t let us move back. I hate it here. It is
Your letter is excellent. I have only a minor suggestion.
Dear Karl, Daniel, and Martin,
I no longer live in Berlin. I am now living in a new house in "Out-with.” At the new house, my father says that I will understand some day why we are living here, but no matter how many times I tell him it was a bad idea, he won’t let us move back. I hate it here. It is
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