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Hello. I was asked to translate a CV from Russian to English. I translated, but I want it to be checked by a native English speaker for grammatical and stylistic mistakes. Especially I am not strong in the articles. Please check it. It will be read in the USA.


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Date of birth: ...
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The journalist

1. Education:
2010 - Moscow school of political researches, Golitsyno town, federal seminars on the theme of «Right. Economy. Politics. Mass-media» (June, July, December) - the graduate
2009 - a special course «Information wars» All-Russia youth educational Forum "Seliger-2009";
2009 – a master class for the journalists covering a youth theme in mass-media;
2008 – regional festival of mass-media «On seven hills. Vyatka-2008»;
2007 – an inter-regional youth forum «We are citizens of Russia»;
2007 – trainings of personal growth;
2006 – Course of «Journalism of partnership. How to make mass-media useful for people» (Moscow city);
2004-2009 – State humanitarian university of Viatka, social-humanitarian faculty, speciality «Social work», specialization «social-psychological consultation of population»;
2002-2004 – the Kirov region, Omutninsky college of pedagogics, economics and right, a speciality «State and municipal management», the diploma SB 3205494 ? 5153 (honours degree);

2. Professional achievements
- 2010 - the chairman of public relations committee of Youth parliament of the Kirov region, IV convocation;
- Following the results of the All-Russia youth educational forum "Seliger-2009" I entered into a country media reserve, had a creative work by the results of training in a special course "Information wars", was recognized the best in the nomination "text" and this work was presented to Dmitry Medvedev on a disk with the best works of young journalists of Russia;
- 2009 - a winner of open competition of the governor of the Kirov region on forming of a youth personnel reserve of the governor of the Kirov region in "Mass-media communications" area;
- 2009 - a participant of the All-Russia forum of winners "The breakthrough", devoted to close of Year of youth in Russia (nominee);
- 2006, 2008, 2009 - became a winner of regional professional skill competitions;
- 2009 - I was published in the magazine "Journalist" (Moscow), on a site of readers' club of a Russian newspaper;
- 2007, 2008, 2010 - became a hero of printing publications and teleplots;
- During my working period of time heroes of my matter were: Irina Khakamada, Grigory Guselnikov, Dmitry Strashnov, Grigory Javlinsky, Matvej Ganapolsky, Danil Hachaturov, Michael Litvak, Konstantin Baksht, Igor Mann, Vladimir Putin

4. Professional skills:
Competent and logical speech (oral and written);
Ability to create and edit texts of various level, content and style;
Skills of forming and maintenance of professional communications;
Search of information partners, work with the public and mass-media;
Ability to communicate with a big amount of people personally and by phone;
Ability to quickly analyze and process the arriving information;
Work with interactive projects (the organization and carrying out of "round tables», intellectual games);
I am easily and quickly being taught, active, mobile, purposeful stress-resistant optimist. There are no difficulties in adjustment of constructive mutual relations with colleagues

5. Work experience:
February of 2011 till present - website of the dance-sport club "Yuventa", Kirov, the journalist (combination);
February of 2011 till present – JSC "Kirovsky mashzavod 1 Maya", the leading specialist in public relations;
October 2010 – February 2011 – Autonomous Institution News agency "Vyatinfo", the correspondent of economics department;
2009-2010 - magazine «Bizness Klass Kirov», the journalist;
November, 2009 - magazine «Gorod Detstva Kirov», journalist (combination);
2008 – newspaper «Vyatskiy kray», Kirov, combination;
2007 – a regional youth newspaper «Molodezhnyj prospekt na Vyatke», Kirov, a non-staff correspondent;
2007, 2005 – a secretary for enrollment of citizens in a public reception of the candidate to the post of the head of the town administration (Omutninsk town, the Kirov region);
2006 - 2009 – Omutninsky regional newspaper AI «Edtiiton of newspaper «Nasha Zhizn», Omutninsk, the correspondent;
2005 – 2006 – the newspaper «Omutninskiye vedomosti», Omutninsk, the Kirov region, a non-staff correspondent

6. Hobbies: reading of business literature and fiction, the choreography

Writing date: 02.05.2011
  

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hi, i was thinking 2009; my article/some of my work/ my work was published in the magazine 'journalist' (moscow)

  • hi, i was thinking 2009; my article/some of my work/ my work was published in the magazine 'journalist' (moscow)
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hi, i was thinking

2009; my article/some of my work/ my work was published in the magazine 'journalist' (moscow)

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