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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Can you correct very ugly sentence?

Can you correct very ugly sentence?

Don't buy something that if you were to lose you will cry because of financial aspect.
  

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Don't buy something that if you were to lose you WOULD cry because of THE financial aspect. It still sounds awkward. Don't buy something you can't afford.

— JohnBoz

  • Don't buy something that if you were to lose you WOULD cry because of THE financial aspect.
  • It still sounds awkward.
  • Don't buy something you can't afford.
  • Don't buy something you can't afford to lose.
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Anonymous Can you correct very ugly sentence?Don't buy something that if you were to lose you WOULD cry because of THE financial aspect.
It still sounds awkward.

Don't buy something you can't afford.

Don't buy something you can't afford to lose.
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