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Austere125rivers Posted 14 years ago
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he idea of drinking 8 cups of water per day is just a commercial hype created by bottled water companies in Europe during the 50y.they used a "medieval" theory to land on this number 8. They thought that for each calorie of food , one should drink one milliliter of water . Thus 2000 cal means two liters ( 8 cups). This is not science but pure consumerism. You should drink water when you like to. You should never drink water when you don't feel any thirst. Water intoxication is fatal. Drinking just 16 cups of water can lead to death. So if you take 8 cups water plus the water from soups food, vegetable you are in real danger. Please before voting thumb down search on Google about "Water intoxication and death"
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You are very sloppy with your punctuation. I have underlined some problem areas. they used a "m edieva l" theory to land on this number 8.
- You are very sloppy with your punctuation.
- I have underlined some problem areas.
- they used a "m edieva l" theory to land on this number 8.
- They thought that for each calorie of foo d , on e should drink one milliliter of wat er .
- Th us 2000 cal means two liters ( 8 cups).
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You are very sloppy with your punctuation. I have underlined some problem areas. Please correct them and re-post here:
he idea of drinking 8 cups of water per day is just a commercial hype created by bottled water companies in Europe during the 50y.they used a "medieval" theory to land on this number 8. They thought that for each calorie of foo
he idea of drinking 8 cups of water per day is just a commercial hype created by bottled water companies in Europe during the 50y.they used a "medieval" theory to land on this number 8. They thought that for each calorie of foo
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