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Topic: Advertising is becoming more and more common in everyday life.

It is true that the development of advertising is increasing significant in a daily life. In my opinion, this growth could be both positive and negative.

On the one hand, advertising brings several benefits for not only consumer but also business in modern society. First, it help investors are able to promote their products in some wider ways. For example, advertising is responsible for creating awareness among consumers, as can be seen by the success of market leaders such as Nike and Coca Cola in the world. Moreover, the growing popularity of online advertising results a lot of advantages for customers because they are likely to buy or order their favorite goods on the electronic media such as internet and television.

On the other hand, I believe that advertising have a variety of negative impacts on purchasers. The first drawbacks is that consumers have to pay higher cost for a huge number of their commodities. If investors or bussinesses want to broadcast propaganda about the styles and price of their new products, they will need to be spend a sum of money on most television channels. Therefore, it is difficult for customers to are able to purchase several reasonable and cheap commodities. Furthermore, the quality of advertised commodities is unsatisfactory to customers’s expectancy. Commercial advertising of investors often focus on aim mainly at a target audience such as children and adolescents who always not be wary of the claims made in advertisement which are often exaggerated and untrue.As a result, they can not purchase various high quality products.

In conclusion, advertising is becoming popular around the world, I believe that it has some effective and unhelpful effects to people.