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Topic: some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Others believe that it is getting easier. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People have different views about whether it is difficult to live a life in urban areas. While a number of people think that this problem is unconvenient for person to have a fife in city regions.I will argue that living those places is getting easier.

There are various reasons why people should not live in lively places. Firstly, the cost of living in a large number of modern regions is extremely expensive, so they will become harder to pay a great deal of money on their financial issues. For example, Ho Chi Minh city where has the price of an apartment or house is three times as much as other countryside such as Nghe An and Thanh Hoa, so it is uneasy for people to seek or rent a flat when they just move in Ho Chi Minh city . Secondly, people's healthy problems also are affected servely by environment pollutation. For instance, in Viet nam , the number of people who have been diseases such as pulmonary tuberculosic and petechial fewer rise remarkably in the summer by they have to suffer a sum of the pollution of air overload which is eliminated from manufactories where produce various industrial comodities such as local and metro.

However, I believe that individuals will become easier if they have a life in developed cities. The first convenience is that city life provide people with advanced university education which offers student more employment opportunities to lead a fullfiling life. Because students will be developed soft skills and communication skill during student life before entering into big firms through extracurriculum activities and English clubs which are organized by their university. Furthermore, people would gain more opportunities to seek a prospective when they live in modern society. Because developed cities have a large number of companies and manufactures. Therefore, students who are learned advanced knowledge from university are more likely to achieve success in future work.

In conclusion, while some people think that urban regions are uneasy for people to lead a life , it seems to me that modern society satisfy the basic needs of life.