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Everything began a day when I wake up and realized that I wanted to do this, but everything turns around the things was not so easy like a thought.
Good morning darling wake up don’t be lazy today is your big day, I wake up and Istarted to think that today is my big day. To day is the day the possibility to work at one of the biggest detective agency in New York. Ever since I was a boy a have always dreamt to work in a detective agency I always played and saw detective’s series.
I ate my breakfast and read the newspaper like always I kissed my wife and drove to the detective agency there I saw a man who seems nice. He was happy and he smile all the and l he came I started to talk whit me. I cruses my arms and started pray I was very nervous that moment.
Hello my name is Ryan Robinson and I man the chef, you must be peter
Yes it is right I am Peter McClain nice to meet you
Nice to meet you too .Peter sits down please
I sat and he started to explain everything who they work and we asked me what was my expectations or if a have work before. That moment I was very nervous after but Ryan was a kind man and he understood after we talk he say ‘Peter welcome to you new job I now that you are a very responsible man and you are not going to disappoint me but I must to warn you, in the beginning some cases are very hard and you must to be strong and remember why you are here. It is my advice and I hope you take this
I was so happy that I only answer yes sir I well not disappoint you and that moment someone call. It was a woman who needs help. I heard Mr. Robinson said yes I talk whit one of my guys and he well contact you after. And then he says
Peter it seems that you have a crime to resolve but first you must to call this woman
I was so happy everything seems so easy I get a job who in the beginnings thought it was impossible to get and I have a crime to resolve is perfect almost perfect..
I call this woman his name is Susan in the beginning she cries but in the same moment she was happy because I wanted to take this case but I was confuse because everything was so strange I decided to meet here after lunch and after I meet my wife I told here everything she was happy for me she was proud like always my wife is always there when I need her.
I remember the first time I meet her it was in waynes coffee I draw the coffee in her closes I was very sad my dad passed away the same day anyway I remember when a draw the coffee she smile and she said don’t worry its fine and she asked me if I feel good because I saw very sad I tell here and everything started there..
I waited Susan I saw here coming she was very sad I could see the desperation and who sad she was in her eyes I felt very bad.
-Hello I am Peter McCabe you must be Susan
Yes peter I am Susan nice to meet you
-How can I help you?
Well my situation I very difficult my daughter was killed and the police think that my son killed my daughter.
What? Why?
The police say that they found evidence in his room. They found a knife and blood .
How old are you son and daughter?
He is 11 years old.
Did you hear or saw something?
Yes I heard something but I thought that it was a dog or cat.
Did someone saw or heard something strange that night?
No, no one, please I am confused and desperate you must to help me
Yes off curse I want to help you but I must to talk whit the police first I call you when I heard something
In my head I Could image a child kill her own sister it most to be something wrong the Next day I meet Mr. wrong the man how is in charge I talked whit him and asked me who I was I present me and after I asked he all the information we was a very annoy man he said I believe that you can help this boy because he has confessed that he is the murder.
what had the boy confessed no it most to be some error I talk whit the boys mom and she never mention that the boy had confessed
I don’t now the only thing that I now is that the boy had confessed and now we are wainted to what the had to say I sorry
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