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Achucoul Posted 10 years ago
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In continution of my visit to Atherm in this morning, as advised by Mr. Magesh, producion head of Atherm to speak with Schneider purchasing department, I have discussed with Mr. Rajakumar, purchasing head of Schneider. He said that his management has decided to cut down the cost of all fasteners. He has tested Rivet India's rivet nut that delivers 4.5 to &Nm torque. Whereas our rivet nut delivers 3.5 to 4Nm torque. The price of Rivet India's rivet nut is 4.20 INR. Our selling price is 11.30 INR. Since Rivet India's rivet nut is superior than our rivet nut in all aspects, he has decided to buy from Rivet India.
  

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In continuation of my visit to Atherm this morning, as advised by Mr. Magesh, producion head of Atherm, to speak with Schneider (What is Schneider? A person?

  • In continuation of my visit to Atherm this morning, as advised by Mr.
  • Magesh, producion head of Atherm, to speak with Schneider (What is Schneider?
  • A person?
  • The name of the company?
  • )the purchasing department at Schneider, I had a conversation with Mr.
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In continuation of my visit to Atherm this morning, as advised by Mr. Magesh, producion head of Atherm, to speak with Schneider (What is Schneider? A person? The name of the company? I'm guessing the name of a company.)the purchasing department at Schneider, I had a conversation with Mr. Rajakumar, the purchasing head of Schneider. He said that his management team has decided to reduce

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