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Achucoul Posted 10 years ago
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Topic: The purpose of the visit was to hand the brass samples, a quantity of 20 pieces over to Mr. Ajay who is heading the quality department of TAFE LIMITED.

Outcome: I handed the samples over to Mr. Ajay for testing. He will give us the feedback within 10 days.

This sample is for their TVS-BMW project. This will be used for front & side of the head lamp assembly. Besides TVS-BMW project, they have other running projects in which brasses are used. He gave me the contact detail of purchasing head. We may have to make an appointment with him and explain the advantages of our brasses.
  

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Topic: The purpose of the visit was to hand over the brass samples, a quantity of 20 pieces to Mr. Ajay, who heads the quality department of TAFE LTD. Outcome: I handed the samples over to Mr.

  • Topic: The purpose of the visit was to hand over the brass samples, a quantity of 20 pieces to Mr.
  • Ajay, who heads the quality department of TAFE LTD.
  • Outcome: I handed the samples over to Mr.
  • Ajay for testing.
  • He will provide feedback to us within 10 days.
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Topic: The purpose of the visit was to hand over the brass samples, a quantity of 20 pieces to Mr. Ajay, who heads the quality department of TAFE LTD.

Outcome: I handed the samples over to Mr. Ajay for testing. He will provide feedback to us within 10 days.

This sample is for TAFE's TVS-BMW project. It will be used for the front & side of the headlamp assembly. Besides the TVS-BM

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