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Achucoul Posted 10 years ago
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We explained BBC company that our parts BSC 3208 and BSC 4010 are not available in stock. So, we are not in a position to submit the above sample parts. We requested them to place us an order for a 1000 pieces of each parts. We said that though there is a minimum order quantity of a 20000 pieces, we would try to give them a 1000 pieces for their test. Mr. Kumar, who heads purchasing department said that he would discuss this among their team and get back to us shortly.
  

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Suggested changes: We explained to BBC company that our Parts BSC 3208 and BSC 4010 are presently not in stock. Thus we are unable to submit samples . We asked them to give us an order for 1000 of each of these parts.

  • Suggested changes: We explained to BBC company that our Parts BSC 3208 and BSC 4010 are presently not in stock.
  • Thus we are unable to submit samples .
  • We asked them to give us an order for 1000 of each of these parts.
  • We explained that although we have a minimum order quantity of 20000 pieces, we would try to provide 1000 pieces for their test.
  • Mr.
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Suggested changes:

We explained to BBC company that our Parts BSC 3208 and BSC 4010 are presently not in stock. Thus we are unable to submit samples. We asked them to give us an order for 1000 of each of these parts. We explained that although we have a minimum order quantity of 20000 pieces, we would try to p

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