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Achucoul Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Can you correct the sentences please

I gave Mr. Joseph our address to send the form no 16.

They had been manufacturing telecom related equipment wherein our products were used. Currently as there is no such projects, They are not buying our products. If there is such kind of projects where our products are needed, They will prefer to buy only our brand.
  

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“They had been manufacturing telecom-related equipment wherein our products were used. Currently, as there are no such projects, they are not buying our products. ” When using “telecom” in the generic sense, either hyphenate it or omit “related”, since telecom is well known as an industry.

— Wilpeter

  • “They had been manufacturing telecom-related equipment wherein our products were used.
  • Currently, as there are no such projects, they are not buying our products.
  • ” When using “telecom” in the generic sense, either hyphenate it or omit “related”, since telecom is well known as an industry.
  • Either “If there are such projects, where…” or as I have suggested.
  • Because “If” is used, “would” applies.
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“They had been manufacturing telecom-related equipment wherein our products were used. Currently, as there are no such projects, they are not buying our products. If there is such kind of project where our products are needed, they would prefer to buy only our brand.”

When using “telecom” in the generic sense, either hyphenate it or omit “related”, sin
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