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Achucoul Posted 11 years ago
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Boss: Delhi Region performance has been absolutely disappointing!
Reply to boss: I agree your words. My this year performance is disappointing me as well. As I said before, I am now focusing on tools which can be a recurring business. I have got a list of products of which our customers are buying from our competition. We are working on that and soon we are going to submit our offers. I hope we can get good recurring business in 2016.
Reply to boss: I agree your words. My this year performance is disappointing me as well. As I said before, I am now focusing on tools which can be a recurring business. I have got a list of products of which our customers are buying from our competition. We are working on that and soon we are going to submit our offers. I hope we can get good recurring business in 2016.
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I agree with your statement. This year’s performance disappointed me as well. As I said before, I am now focusing on tools that will create recurring business.
- I agree with your statement.
- This year’s performance disappointed me as well.
- As I said before, I am now focusing on tools that will create recurring business.
- I have made a list of products that our customers are buying from our competition, and we are determining how we can offer them competitively.
- I expect to achieve improved recurring business in 2016.
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I agree with your statement. This year’s performance disappointed me as well. As I said before, I am now focusing on tools that will create recurring business. I have made a list of products that our customers are buying from our competition, and we are determining how we can offer them competitively. I expect to achieve improved recurring business in 2016.
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