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Layla1234 Posted 13 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Can you correct the following essays?
1)Medicine is closer to my interests than law. I don't like history and dry knowledge. I am an active person so I like being in the movement. For my biology and anatomy are more interesting than articles (in law).
Of course I prefer to study abroad but I realise it is expensive and require fluency in language. On the other hand being abroad is the best way to learn a new language and creates possibilities for finding a better job.
Private universities in Italy do not have a good opinion so I would prefer to study for free at a state university. Private studying is very expensive and not everybody can afford to spend so much money.
The best way is going straight away to work especially when there are no jobs for young people in our country. Nowadays, every gap is unprofitable I think it is difficult to go to work after one year gap because you can be out of circulation.
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I prefer to study in Rome than in the countryside because it is a historical and one of the most beatiful towns in Italy. In Rome there is a specific, cultural atmosphere which makes efficient students' socializing.
In my opinion students should live in a dormitory. Firstly, it is cheaper and this matters to students' income and has a big imporantce to them.
Secondly, there are many other students with whom you can learn and help each other doing homeworks and share housework.Furthermore, I think students' life should be cheerful and in a dormitory it is so.
I studied nursing for 5 years. I think it is better to graduate once only and defend your diploma thesis once as well,It is less stressful. Besides, you can be a student longer and lead an easy-going life. While after three-year studies people often go to work.
I prefer going to lectures and seminars because I can feel academic atmosphere. It allows me to get to know new people, traditions and unite with personnel at the university. When you study online all these things are impossible.
Of course I prefer to study abroad but I realise it is expensive and require fluency in language. On the other hand being abroad is the best way to learn a new language and creates possibilities for finding a better job.
Private universities in Italy do not have a good opinion so I would prefer to study for free at a state university. Private studying is very expensive and not everybody can afford to spend so much money.
The best way is going straight away to work especially when there are no jobs for young people in our country. Nowadays, every gap is unprofitable I think it is difficult to go to work after one year gap because you can be out of circulation.
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I prefer to study in Rome than in the countryside because it is a historical and one of the most beatiful towns in Italy. In Rome there is a specific, cultural atmosphere which makes efficient students' socializing.
In my opinion students should live in a dormitory. Firstly, it is cheaper and this matters to students' income and has a big imporantce to them.
Secondly, there are many other students with whom you can learn and help each other doing homeworks and share housework.Furthermore, I think students' life should be cheerful and in a dormitory it is so.
I studied nursing for 5 years. I think it is better to graduate once only and defend your diploma thesis once as well,It is less stressful. Besides, you can be a student longer and lead an easy-going life. While after three-year studies people often go to work.
I prefer going to lectures and seminars because I can feel academic atmosphere. It allows me to get to know new people, traditions and unite with personnel at the university. When you study online all these things are impossible.
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I have highlighted some areas that need attention. 1)Medicine is closer to my interests than law. I don't like history and dry knowledge .
- I have highlighted some areas that need attention.
- 1)Medicine is closer to my interests than law.
- I don't like history and dry knowledge .
- ) .
- For my biology and anatomy are more interesting than articles (in law).
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I have highlighted some areas that need attention.
1)Medicine is closer to my interests than law. I don't like history and dry knowledge. (Not a good collocation) I am an active person so I like being in the movement (a political movement?). For my biology and anatomy are more interesting than articles (in law).
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1)Medicine is closer to my interests than law. I don't like history and dry knowledge. (Not a good collocation) I am an active person so I like being in the movement (a political movement?). For my biology and anatomy are more interesting than articles (in law).
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