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Student: Angelozzi, Veronica

Subject: Written Expression II

Opinion Essay: Fashion in every day life





A Ticket to a fashionable lifestyle



During the half part of the year most people start to organise their holidays. That organization is by no means easy because holidays require the place where we are going to rest amongst our loved ones and other choices.

Certainly, the most desire wish can turn into the most controversial matter whether it doesn’t fit our expectations.



Among an immerse supply of places to visit, we choose a fashionable beach resort called “Punta del Este” in .

Once there, we come across two standards of living; on the one hand, the high and on the other hand, we find middle and lower classes.



The first one is made up of argentine tourists and European luminaries who choose a ticket to a fashionable lifestyle just to impress and be part of a glamorous environment.

Whereas the latter, make any attempt to catch up the latest trends.

My question is the following Don’t we turn into marionettes lead by the standards set by today’s fashionable society? what on earth being in fashion means?



In my opinion, it means a blind adherence to an impose privilege standard which tries to manipulate our sense of human beings.





  

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During the (half part - half part does not make sense. Do you mean the last part? ) of the year most people start to organise their holidays.

  • During the (half part - half part does not make sense.
  • Do you mean the last part?
  • ) of the year most people start to organise their holidays.
  • That organization is by no means easy because holidays require us to choose the place where we are going to relax with our loved ones and other choices.
  • ) Among an (immerse supply- wrong word choices) of places to visit, we chose a fashionable beach resort called “Punta del Este” in Uruguay.
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During the (half part - half part does not make sense. Do you mean the last part? The last half?) of the year most people start to organise their holidays. That organization is by no means easy because holidays require us to choose the place where we are going to relax with our loved ones and other choices.

Certainly, the most desire wish can turn into the most controversial matter whe

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